TLC by Chrouya
Script: Suisei_06_[Main][rip]
Workraw: Suisei_06[WR]

61
Good effort. Anyway, what \Ndo you say we have lunch?
Good effort. Anyway, how \Nabout we have lunch?
{I didn't like the wording of this line}

64
Say, Ledo, are you sure \Nthat's enough for you?
Say, Ledo, are you fine \Nwith just that?
{alternative}

77
Really? Then you oughta look like it's good!
{note to editor: it's about putting up a smile or something as it tastes good}

95
Okay!
Is that so.
{I don't like the translation of soukai into okay}

116
Well, of course! It looks like \Nall you eat is seaweed bread.
Well, of course! When you're only eating seaweed bread...
{you de ha mistl}

146
You should know how to swim, too.
You should learn how to swim, too.
{should know rather gives the wrong context}

150
Who's got a turtle shell ass, \Nyou who can't even swim?!
{so this is all liberalized CR way. I believe that Pinion calls her a frozen butt, and she retorts by calling him a hammer}
{ie. sinks right away}

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Characteristic response analysis \Ncomplete. Probability: 99.7%.
Characteristic response analysis \Ncomplete. Probability: 99.97%.
{it's even more probable}